Open Up - AI Style

People want what the people want. And for you guys, that's more of my series Open Up. If you haven't read it, see here!

However, this chapter will be a little bit different. I'm giving the power over to AI. See what it thinks would make a suitable next chapter (I made it create Chapter 14, see Chapter 13 here). 

(Maybe it will give me some inspiration).

So, I share with you the chapter from two of the AI generators I used, in response to providing it with the last two chapters of this series. I requested that the AI generate another piece of text that followed the general story and themes of Open Up. 

(Warning, it doesn't give much in the way of inspiring content, who'd have guessed, eh?). 

Anyway - let's give our first AI a shot at continuing this wonderful tale: 

Celia had to smile, she couldn't help it. She knew the advice was well-meaning but also a little naive. It would take more than that to protect her on this site. sexycici95: Thanks for the advice! I'm careful, don't worry ;) With one last glance at Damian's message, Celia decided to log off and go to bed. Maybe tomorrow she'd be able to think more clearly about what he wanted from her - and if she should accept his offer of a present... The next morning, Celia awoke with a start. She had been dreaming of Damian and his mysterious present. Could it really be true? It was too good to be true! She groggily checked her phone and saw that she had two new messages in her inbox - one from Benbourbon57 confirming their show for later today and another from Damian86 saying he'd like to meet up soon. Celia couldn't believe it! He wanted to see her after all this time... But what did he mean by 'present'? What could it possibly be? And why now? Her heart raced as she replied: sexycici95: I'd love to see you soon :) When do you have in mind? Celia waited for his response, her heart pounding. She still couldn't believe it - Damian was actually going to meet her! What did he have planned? She was both excited and nervous at the same time. Finally, her phone beeped and she opened the message eagerly. Damian86: How about tomorrow? I have something special planned for you ;) Celia couldn't believe her eyes! Could it be true? She had waited so long for this moment, and now it was finally happening. She quickly replied with a yes and they arranged to meet at a nearby park the next day. The rest of the day passed in a blur as Celia prepared for her meeting with Damian. What did he have planned? Was she ready for whatever surprise he had in store? She couldn't help but feel a little apprehensive, but she was also excited to finally see him after all this time. The next day arrived and Celia nervously made her way to the park. She spotted Damian right away - he looked exactly as she remembered him, with his dark hair and bright smile that lit up his face when he saw her. He ran over and embraced her in a warm hug before leading her off towards a picnic blanket spread out on the grass nearby. He pulled out a small box from his pocket and handed it to Celia with a grin. "Open it," he said softly, watching intently as she opened the lid to find an antique pendant necklace inside - one that matched perfectly with the one that her grandmother had given her when she was a child. Celia gasped in surprise, tears springing to her eyes as she looked up at Damian in wonder. "It's beautiful," she whispered, overcome with emotion. She couldn't believe he had managed to find something so special for her - it meant so much more than any material gift could ever mean. Damian smiled and pulled Celia into another hug before leading them over to the picnic blanket where they sat down together and enjoyed a lovely meal of sandwiches, fruit and cupcakes while talking about their lives since they last saw each other. It felt like no time had passed between them at all - it was almost as if they'd never been apart.

As the sun began to set, Celia and Damian walked hand in hand back towards her car, both of them feeling happy and content. Before she left, Damian leaned in for one last kiss - a sweet promise that this was only the beginning of something special between them.

 

So, our first AI clearly provided a romantic spin on this ol' tale. Quite sickening with the picnic of fruit and cupcakes, don't you think? And I'm also really loving the addition of Grandmother and her antique pendant into the mix. Smooth, very smooth. Despite it being at least grammatically and semantically sound, I don't think it truly captured the essence of the characters. 

Thus, not really satisfied with the first take on the next chapter, I tried another AI to see if it would get the vibe a little more. And, well. I'll let you be the judge: 

This time, she recognised the name. However, she immediately came to the conclusion that he was full of crap. Surely there would be a minimum of 6 chicks on a site called 'dames'. She'd looked at dozens of chicks on sites before. She even had a best friend who had a thing for strong-arm babes. So she'd written him off as a fake. She'd known to be careful. She should have known.

Funbrosky: Come over and let's see if you're wrong, I dare ya. ;)

Celia hesitated, but deleted the message and looked around her room again. As a perverse control freak, she didn't want to feel as if she was being controlled. Besides, she couldn't show him any of her naughty bits yet. Not that she had any, anyway. She was only well along the way in her transition. But maybe she'd gone too far in case she didn't feel comfortable with him. It was hard to tell sometimes. It was almost like being in love for the first time. She'd never done that before, at least not with a real person. Yet. It was kind of nice. Was she growing fond of Damian?

Not really. That'd be stupid. But she'd be lying if she didn't think he was just...good to look at. In a more positive light, of course. He was only a hairdresser and looked a bit of a dork at times, but he was good company at others. Well, that's what she had said.

She didn't want to risk finding out he was as great to speak to in person as he was over the site.

Funbrosky: A bit slow with the online stuff huh? ;) be honest, would you really be interested in seeing me? ;) I have everything I'd need ;)  let me know. ;) :)

Celia knew she could never meet up with him, but he wasn't exactly a liar. Although she wasn't sure she could trust the replies to anything he said. But she needed more to work with. He could maybe help her with something. He could show her what she would have to do to transform.

She finished her last game of left-handed Far Cry and got up to get ready.

Damian: Hey Celia, what's up?

She replied that she was fine and busy. She tried to make it sound vague and uninformative.

Damian: As you say, busy. Have you thought of what you could do with that Jack in the Box character you started?

Celia laughed. She was starting to suspect Damian was aware of her humour. She had to choose between two responses. She couldn't come up with anything earth-shattering to say. So she said the first thing that came into her head.

sexycici95: You think he's sexy? XD

She thought about using the 'oh he's such a retard' word but she felt she didn't want to go down that route.

Funbrosky: I have another way. Come over now.

Celia was laughing to herself. It sounded so strange. She couldn't help it. She tried to resist the temptation, but it was too strong.

Celia: Where? x

He replied as if he knew. He knew where she lived and which room she was in. So it was relatively easy for her to tell him.

Celia: Just come up to my room. ;) it's the one on the right at the top. :)

She watched him slowly float to her bedroom. He was quite the sexy figure, he'd do for sure.

Damian: Lol yeah! You've already seen the thing

funbrosky: How do you know I haven't? ;)

In one of his posts, he'd said he had proof of being a girl inside the same computer as him. Celia suspected he was using some kind of internet-based magic. He had probably been looking at her earlier. She was a beautiful woman. At least, she felt she was. She didn't mind admitting that. 

This AI just really went off-piste with... whatever you can call this chapter. I lost it at 'watched him slowly float to her bedroom'. 

It was quite something to read this AI and it's attempt at continuing the chapter. I'm really not sure it understood the different characters, at all. But, I guess it would've done better had I fed it more from previous chapters. 

I certainly do not take any credit for the language the AI chose to use in this one. Really quite something. And to just really give a twist with some gaming references, and a random transition too? Okay, sure. 

Much as it was fun to take a glimpse into what the AI believes could come next, think it is safe to say that human writers jobs aren't truly threatened. Although the technology is only improving. So.

Maybe watch this space. 

Thanks for reading, gang. And maybe I'll get writing the real next chapter soon. Minus... floating into bedrooms. 

P.S. Because the second AI really did provide some gold, here is how the story continued: 

Suddenly, her door flew open and in walked Damian. He was completely naked. He'd even taken off his socks and shoes. She couldn't believe her eyes. He wasn't big or anything, but he was extremely sexy. He still had the Jack in the Box uniform on. His face was even beautiful, even if it was a bit burnt from the campfire. And his body was divine.

The only imperfection was his penis, which looked a bit smaller than she'd been imagining. He wasn't small, of course. That would be ridiculous. But she hadn't realised he was so big. She hadn't wanted to look at it, as if she were staring at her son's genitalia.

She looked away quickly. She didn't want him to think she was interested in him that way.

He'd probably think she'd never seen a penis before. She'd have to tell him the truth about her past, once he'd given her the spell.

Damian: Hey, it's okay. I won't judge you. Lol!

The next thing she felt was a tickling sensation on her leg. She looked down, and in his hand, he had a pair of tights.

Funbrosky: Haha, that's nice. :) Let me have some of yours. ;)

He handed her a pair of his tights, which she'd had to take off.

 

I am truly astounded by the leaps made here. Naked? But still with a full uniform on? The small but also big penis? The incest? Really quite something.